Two poems by Oliver Comins

 
 

    Golf Behind Trees

 

An elegant course is exposed by newly opened air.
There used to be a thick hedge, armed with trees.
We would hear the thwack of their swings and hits
followed by good silence or disappointing scutter.

In days gone by, for all we could see, those golfers
might have been naked, their natural undulations
at play. Now, they must cover all that and more
beneath tailored sporting attire with ornate crests.

We might pause a moment to watch them drive
across a stream we didn’t know was there before.
They strike their shots with an orderly violence
and mumble litanies of praise or commiseration.

 
 
 

    Fire Round the Window

 

All Saints, Burton Dassett

 

Trees encroach from a slope on the east side,
edging down to a boundary wall which contains
these swathes of grass, a crowd of headstones.

The detail on some memorials is all but erased,
lettering worn away or hidden beneath lichen.
The names on others are fresh cut and clear.

A setting sun glowing through foliage is more
than a trick of the light. This ironstone church
becomes translucent – the fire within, without.

For the time it takes the rock to burn a little
and then resolve itself, the air doesn’t move,
except on the hill where sheep are bleating.

 
 


 

Oliver writes: ‘Golf Behind Trees’ is another of the Pitshanger Park poems, set near where I live in Ealing. Located in resonant South Warwickshire landscape, Burton Dassett is a place I went to many times as a child and which I still visit as an adult.

 

Oliver Comins

About Oliver Comins

Oliver Comins lives and works in West London. His short collection, ‘Battling Against the Odds’ (Templar Poetry 2016), was wholly concerned with the game of golf and the sport of life. A full collection, 'Oak Fish Island', was published in 2018 by Templar Poetry.